KimmiKitti Posted December 15, 2004 Report Share Posted December 15, 2004 Im Stronger than youI can't lift 20 ibs.Im stronger than youI only weigh about 90Im stronger than youYou can lift 2 cheerleadersI can'tBut Im still stronger than you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfie Posted December 15, 2004 Report Share Posted December 15, 2004 Im Stronger than youI can't lift 20 ibs.Im stronger than youI only weigh about 90Im stronger than youYou can lift 2 cheerleadersI can'tBut Im still stronger than you.<{POST_SNAPBACK}> I'm stronger than youI can't lift 20 lbs.I'm stronger than youI only weigh about 90I'm stronger than youYou can lift 2 cheerleadersI can'tBut I'm still stronger than you.<{POST_SNAPBACK}> 4 missing apostrophe's + 1 misspelling. 10 point deduction. Grade: 90Good effort and thought, but without proper punctuation and spelling, you could fail to deliver your message effectively. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KimmiKitti Posted December 15, 2004 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2004 I'm stronger than youI can't lift 20 lbs.I'm stronger than youI only weigh about 90I'm stronger than youYou can lift 2 cheerleadersI can'tBut I'm still stronger than you. There. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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