KimmiKitti Posted November 18, 2004 Report Share Posted November 18, 2004 I need a place to stay the wind blows byYou hold me by the hand and i start to cryIm really sorry if i cant defendBut you always has me as a friendIts iight to be afraid and aloneTo be in a fearing zoneCuz im not that girl you thinkWhen my hearts to sink...Im alone In this world that is big and cruelScared to be the big foolIn deep LoveIn deep LoveYeah, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
punkrawker Posted November 19, 2004 Report Share Posted November 19, 2004 Is that suppost to be a love poem or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sugargirl Posted November 23, 2004 Report Share Posted November 23, 2004 Yeah...is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeautifulDisaster Posted November 26, 2004 Report Share Posted November 26, 2004 Wow thats good!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KimmiKitti Posted November 28, 2004 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2004 its not that good... is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfie Posted November 28, 2004 Report Share Posted November 28, 2004 Nope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rockoncheese101 Posted December 10, 2004 Report Share Posted December 10, 2004 Personally, that was good.But i am still puzzled on what type of poem it is. It went from subject to subject. But that was still kooL too.Obviously ur a young poet in the making. Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KimmiKitti Posted December 11, 2004 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2004 Making? I have alot im just too lazy to type it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Punkie Posted December 11, 2004 Report Share Posted December 11, 2004 ..lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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