rockoncheese101 Posted November 11, 2004 Report Share Posted November 11, 2004 (edited) *``Dear Daddy``* Dear daddy,I hear your off to war,I hear your fighting @ the core,No1 told me,until you were gone,from the look on momma's facei knew something was horribly wrong, Dear daddy,is this why you were so sad,while you were hugging me I was trying to act glad, in a way you told me,but the words were going slow,you kept saying the same thing,so i kept saying "i know , i know" That night you gave me a locket,to show how much you cared,then you were gone again, Daddy i miss you,i love you,i think about you everyday,when i sleep,I see your face,It only makes me cry,as each day slowly goes by without you, The next day, We got the call,That you had died in war,daddy, I love you so,But according to this locket,its time i let you go! Edited November 11, 2004 by rockoncheese101 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
punkrawker Posted November 12, 2004 Report Share Posted November 12, 2004 I like your poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rockoncheese101 Posted December 10, 2004 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2004 Oh thanks, it seems ur the only one thats responding to my poems. But thats ok.btw, for the record, my dad did NOT die. Thats just a poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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