It was JUST a razor

[rockoncheese101]

Locked inside me

Is a river of tears

Unleashed pain

It cuts me deep on my wrist

Unaware of my actions

I sit out w/ a razor in my hands

On the wet grass upon the stars

Deep enough it cuts inside me

To leave lifelong scars

Sweat dripping from my face

As I focus on the "gems in space"

Enough red to see in a lifetime

But I just see it this time

I felt the tear

Running off my eyes

As I rip off my fake smile

Running into the house

Slamming my feet on the tile

Trying to put what i just did in denyl

I go in my room

Thinking that was me

I could have saved "her"

I look over the blood

I'm still holding the razor

Throwing it across the room

I just stare at it

I dont know what I was expecting it to do

Could it move?

Would it move?

Right then there was so much pain

Not anything I could gain

I looked out the window

It had started to rain

I couldnt lay my arm in the shower

The blood would get caught up in the drain

I walked outside

Put out my arm

So here I am

dropped down on my knees

I can still see

See right through my pain

as i cut upon my wrist

I never thought this would be on the top of my list

What can cause someone

Enough pain

To want to HURT themselves to a limit

Where they just want to die

Yet enough on their mind

To never stop and cry

Just make their existance

A simple give or take

How can that happen?

What could the problem be?

I may have the scars on my arm

But please dont look that way to me.

[shivaree]

Very powerful poem, and it shows a lot of talent if you ask me. Maybe you should join http://www.eliteskills.com/

[punkrawker]

Nice poem. Maybe u should write the poem on here that u gave to me along time ago. I have lots of new poems but dont put them out.

[Mephisto]

... I don't know what to say... It's a great poem that has multiple meanings, if you think about it... Kinda describes me. Well, the first meaning you think of doesn't, but an alternate does. Nice. Keep making good poems like that and I'll keep reading them.

[rockoncheese101]

Nice poem. Maybe u should write the poem on here that u gave to me along time ago. I have lots of new poems but dont put them out.

Uhm..no. Also, u should put them out.

 

... I don't know what to say... It's a great poem that has multiple meanings, if you think about it... Kinda describes me. Well, the first meaning you think of doesn't, but an alternate does. Nice. Keep making good poems like that and I'll keep reading them.

 

thnx